BTEC Creative Media Production
Unit 2 Communication for Creative Media Production
Merit grade task:
On the reverse of this page is a genuine sample letter taken from a website that is intended to show students how to write a proposal letter to clients.
For whatever reason, it is very badly written.
You need to re-write any parts of the letter that you think need revision to make it read clearly in formal English.
Sample Advertising Proposal Letter
To
Ryan Andrews
PRO, Date: 6th June 2011
Centric Advertisement Co.
Subject: Advertising proposal for anticipated upcoming release of our ‘X-men cosmetic product exclusively for men
Dear Mr Andrews,
We would like to present before you advertising proposal for the anticipated release of the cosmetic product “X-men” which is exclusively for men. We have always contributed significantly to the world’s cosmetic industry and developed various effective products for women up until now. For the first time we are releasing the much anticipated new range of luxury cosmetic products exclusively for men.
We strongly believe that these products which are built with high technology and luxury ingredients will suit the customer’s needs. Therefore, we want to advertise the product in various beauty magazines, television channels and newspapers too.
Budget and cost will be negotiable on your acceptance of our proposal. We look forward to your speedy reply regarding this matter.
Yours sincerely,
George Madrew
Ferine Cosmetics Ltd.
Sourced from sampleproposal.org
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