Good choice of image, based clearly on your research. I like the unconventional approach of having the title around the edge of the design. Could you make one of the words at the top taller - eg the white 'schuh' above her head - to stand out as the masthead? I think you need to re-consider the colours and placement of the coverlines as some of them are quite difficult to read. You could look at this in Media Extra on a Monday, if you like. Finally, you need to get your production work proof read to make sure no spelling errors slip through.
Good choice of image, based clearly on your research. I like the unconventional approach of having the title around the edge of the design. Could you make one of the words at the top taller - eg the white 'schuh' above her head - to stand out as the masthead?
ReplyDeleteI think you need to re-consider the colours and placement of the coverlines as some of them are quite difficult to read. You could look at this in Media Extra on a Monday, if you like. Finally, you need to get your production work proof read to make sure no spelling errors slip through.